I am in the upper room with the Mao-ist, breaking bread under an image of Lenin, Trotsky, Stalin and, of course, Mao, all smiling as they face the hammer & sickle ---
the only adornment in an otherwise concrete room, sans the mat under the knee high tables. All the chairs are mismatched -- some plastic, wood benches, a couple stools of bamboo and bike tires -- standing room and wall space
an ebb&flow of red&white hats, t-shirts & flag draped shoulders up an iron spiral stairwell. The salty sweat of pressed flesh, sun and hard baked earth. A man, from the back, brings a big metal bowl of rice & pumpkin. Spice&steam. Another group ascends. The room erupts, as they show red thumb nails.
This is the first time they have voted in 20 years.
Across the chowk, the Sun celebrate in a house. Congress. Marxist-Leninist. A line of robes, or pants, of shorts & sandaled feet chatter animatedly,as they wait in a river awaiting their chance to rise. Tribals in bare feet. Adidas&bling. Move a few steps. Chatter more. Friends. Neighbors. Countrymen. Lending ears, to discuss this
moment.
A man, no more than twenty, tries to explain all thirty political parties at once. Their all Communist, but each different. How one-third of the seats have been reserved for women. How they stamp with the seal of their party. The rest is lost ---
A group leans off the balcony, yelling to those in the street. Small knots of men bend over bowls using their fingers to eat. Through an opening, the women in another room talk, point, &speak in tongues beyond my hearing, peek in on us.
No one wants to leave.
This is the democracy they have sought.
Have fought for.
Tomorrow, they will return -- to town, villages, to work. At the river, women will carry baskets of sand, gravel and concrete to a mixer. A man will add water. Boys will wheelbarrow the mix to as far as they have gotten. Another year, they'll have a bridge
connecting the city, to the town, to the villages, to the jungles and the mountains, to bring new stores. There is already an all inclusive four-story shop in the city. Not as cheap as the market, but convenient. With no haggling.
It sobers me.
But tonight, they celebrate,
in one voice,
and in many.
for PU
The largest democracy at work is a thing of beauty to watch! Great write!
ReplyDeleteThe smug four story fixed price shop is definitely smirking at the poor fellows. In the whole poem this one appears as a sinister character to me. Gosh. Hope it doesn't destroy local business. Nepal is a miniature version of India so even the political scenes appear familiar.
ReplyDeleteThe slow building of the bridge parallels the voting, the promise---will they see how the dark side of democracy creeps in as well. This prose poem opens the possibility that all of us see the connection. Sobering. Beautiful.
ReplyDeleteluv the connecting images which resonate throughout this poem; reads to me haibun style
ReplyDeletemuch love...
People have really got used to going to these big shopping centers which have come up very quickly. But I think that these poor fellows aren't thinking much about how this can influence them...so, they embrace consumerism!How sad...pathetic!
ReplyDeleteSomehow this reminds me of George Romero's satirical film, Dawn of the Dead and his zombies!
Beautifully penned, Hawk!
I am always riveted by your stories of this place. Life, so basic, and so....hopeful, at the same time. 20 years they waited to vote. Wow. I hope the result pleased them. The bridge will be a wonderful connection (I hope), as well. Over here it costs a kazillion dollars to build a bridge. Maybe we should do it their way.
ReplyDeleteYou are the reason i keep writing them sherry. That and they were comissiined pieces.
DeleteAbout to take a holiday break so i may just email you the last two.
Your story touches every nerve. One step closer to "enlightenment." Perhaps we are all just "worker-ants?" We keep trying, working, fighting...do we ever get anywhere, one step forward and four back? Maybe it is only a dance of life? We each play our part.
ReplyDeleteThe perspective and the enthusiasm makes me think we have ceased the value of democracy... where we are being spoon-fed talks and rants, we never talk about what we want to do...
ReplyDeleteI do like it when you write of this place. the building of the bridge to connect them to so many places, the celebration bridge built of the many voices.
ReplyDeleteDemocracies can work whether communism or our democratic systems but all are subject to abuse by those that want more and see the possibility of profit or power from the system. This a is a beautiful account of people working together for their communal good doing what they can. I works best this way until someone wants more.
ReplyDeleteWhat a powerful story. Democracy works in mysterious and miraculous ways!
ReplyDeleteSo eloquently descriptive of the hope that springs eternal in the human heart. Bravo!
ReplyDelete"A man, no more than twenty, tries to explain all thirty political parties at once." This line made me laugh... and sigh, too. Because I know this man (many times he's a girl), and I've listened to him or her, while wondering if the roar of the enthusiasm that feeds each word allows any critical thinking to touch that brain, that need to elaborate what it believes to be the heart of truth.
ReplyDeleteOh, the wonderful hope in your story of those with red thumb nails and the celebrations to follow.
ReplyDeleteAnd 'progress' shows itself in the new store and because of this, life will change and something will be gained, but (also) something will be awfully lost.
Anna :o]
Your vivid depiction of celebration, progress, democracy and ordinary life is amazing. I found myself nodding in agreement or smiling at some of the lines. Brilliant write!
ReplyDeleteCelebrations happen for as many reasons as there are people in the world, people who sweat, and carry baskets of sand, and haggle in the marketplace. May we always be open to the possibility of celebration, even in circumstances that seem desperate.
ReplyDeleteI can relate to the joy and celebration of finally voting ~ We take it for granted here, but some countries don't make it easy for its citizens ~ Hope they earn the leadership they deserve ~
ReplyDeleteA true reason to celebrate! This is written so well, with promise of where a new bridge can lead. Wonderful.
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I think we tend to believe our echo-chamber corners capital T truth, as though any one observation is enough to encompass the whole. we want, as north americans, to view our version of democracy as 'the right one' - but really, is any moment in time, *more* right, than any other ? perhaps... perhaps some moments of governance are more wrong than others (as we now will learn.)
ReplyDeletebut this is a vibrant and living pen , and thought provoking ~
You stagger me, every time I feel what you wrote, and I know I live in a moment of truth, staggering...
ReplyDeleteWhere are you X. are you well? I hope with all my heart that you are and also happy and at peace xox
ReplyDeleteand that you are writing a book and become a published author, I wish for you XoX
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